This is for the Unreliable Narrator Workshop
I finally logged on to dA after a long hiatus and found out that the deadline was fast approaching. This maybe one of the reasons why it may seem a bit hurried. I practically scribbled it off in my haste.
The narrator is hallucinating. A key reason as to why he's unreliable. So my major points of concern are:
1) Is the narrator believable as he goes on about his situation?
2) Is the end too abrupt or does it fit in just fine with the rest of the story?
Thanks so much for reading and hope you enjoyed it