I wanted to write something which combined two different worlds in a more believable manner. And on top of that I wanted to create that element of mystery and inevitableness. Hope it worked out.
I would like to have comments on the following:
1) I wanted the main character to be the teenager he is, did it work out that way or did he seem too mature?
2) The ghost of ancestor also makes an appearance, was it too cliche or did it fit in?
Thanks and enjoy